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BlizzardComics, 09 Aug 2007 03:16 pm

- Okay, for one....I AM AWARE THAT THIS PAGE IS CROWDED. I intentionally crowded this page up with all that text because I wanted to bring a somewhat nervous, uneasy, scrambled feeling about this character, who will be properly introduced later. Also, the story moves fast because it makes people want to keep reading if they get a little confused!! (And yes, that is verified by my readers)

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this is cute ^w^ I like the characters I see so far and I can see a good effort in making these pages! It would be nice to slow it down a bit though owo Shoving a bunch of actions and text onto one page isnt' necessary to have to capture one's attention so you could span these out a bit owo Keep it up! >w<d <3

posted by TakaKouya on 09 Aug 2007 06:07 am





 

Your art style is neat! I like how the art looks really clean. But like the above commenter said, consider slowing down a bit. Don't cram too much into one page. =)

posted by Essency on 09 Aug 2007 12:12 pm





 

Whew, I can see all of the pages now :D
Your drawing style is really nice and the toning is great, seems like it's going to be an interesting story so far :]

posted by Nikicus on 09 Aug 2007 09:11 pm





 

"What's a Place like you doing in a Guy like this?" haha, that's gold.

posted by Sol on 12 Aug 2007 10:20 am



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